This is our main pitch which we presented towards our teacher Mr DeVita to see if it would be successful and reach the right audience. The Feedback we were given was to work on the storyline to make sure it made sense as it appeared quite confusing. We were also advised to check that the people we had put to play a role would be able to do so as this was just a rough copy. Furthermore, we were told to be careful when choosing where to film as the fight scene with a fake knife might look like a danger to the public.
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